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A Mongolian Lament: Excerpt Chapter 4





Chapter 4: The Dog and the Naked Man

Mongolian Proverb: Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it.

Jorja Himmermann arrived in Mongolia in January in the middle of the nation’s coldest month in the country’s longest, bleakest winter. Mongolia’s high elevation, and its remoteness from the sea, categorized the climate as extreme continental. Typically, winter temperatures oscillated between minus twenty degrees and minus thirty-five degrees Celsius. However, the winter of 2010 consistently pushed daily temperatures to minus forty-two degrees Celsius. It was brutal to the extreme—punishing and life threatening. Often the wind was unrelenting, reaching forty-four kilometers per hour. Not for the faint-hearted, nor faint-skinned, the wind cut and stung Jorja’s pale skin until it turned red raw.

Construction was booming, especially during the previous five years, but when snow fell, it was temporarily halted. When the wind whipped up, it was halted again, and when the temperature dipped below minus thirty degrees Celsius, it ceased. For the most part, construction ceased in the winter of 2010.

Beside her apartment, in the vacant plot of land, pipes, construction equipment, and snow-covered machinery remained in the same place untouched, unmoved. A wooden hut on stilts provided shelter for the guards, but the yard dogs roamed free, leaving paw marks in the snow. The sheep dog, never seeking protection from the elements, seemed to be a statue of security.

Solid and square on the white ground, the bankhar rarely moved. Every morning, at the first glow of sunrise, Jorja glanced out of her bedroom window to observe the weather and the great mastiff. In the evening, before switching off the light, she glanced into the construction site to look for the sheep dog. It was always there. She would scrutinize his eyes to check whether they were open, to check their color, and to check whether it was observing her. When humans were not present, the great mastiff’s eyes remained closed. Perhaps it detected people by their scent or movement. In any case, it appeared to be a most effective sentinel. Jorja decided that he needed a name, for she had determined that he was indeed male, and she called him Brik.

After switching off the bedroom light, she’d peek out of the side window to the fifth floor below to see the naked man undertaking his daily exercises. On one occasion, with his back to Jorja, exposing his domed wobbly buttocks, he bent from the waist, to the left, to the right, to the left, and to the right. Another time, facing the window, his arms were outstretched as he undertook twenty squats. Rise and crouch, rise and crouch, and rise and crouch. This action led into a swifter crouch and a forceful rise while extending his arms outward as if pushing away a boulder; crouch and push, crouch and push, and crouch and push. As his pale knees jutted forward, his alabaster posterior stuck outward. Sometimes his action was more of a footsweep, standing firm with legs apart and bringing one leg across the other; footsweep left, footsweep right, and footsweep left. Always naked in the coldest of winter, he was always focused, as if in a trance. The man was almost as large as a sumo wrestler, so Jorja named him Bruce.

Brik and Bruce were similar in many ways. They were both the largest of their species. They were both the epitome of concentration, meditation, and utter absorption in their inner being. They both appeared to demonstrate a gentle exterior with an underlying, secret ability to unexpectedly explode with the brute force of a champion conqueror. They differed only in their movements and outer covering. Brik never seemed to move at all. He was stoic, calm, and inert. Bruce, on the other hand, was in constant motion: deliberate, concentrated, defined, and regimented. Brik was all hair and hound, whereas Bruce was as naked as the day he was born.


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MARTINA NICOLLS is the author of:- The Shortness of Life: A Mongolian Lament (2015), Liberia’s Deadest Ends (2012), Bardot’s Comet (2011), Kashmir on a Knife-Edge (2010) and The Sudan Curse (2009).

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